Third Pass

It's after 6 AM.

I've just finished the third pass through the script.

I'm at 73 pages.  That means 17 pages cut this round.

65 pages cut so far.

The script feels leaner.  The story is cleaner.

25 more pages to cut.

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I watched Billy Bob Thornton's The Bad News Bears in Westwood last night.  Very funny movie.  I laughed a lot.

If you liked Bad Santa, you should definitely see this film.

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I'm about ready to hit the sack.  After I sleep, I'll go have breakfast at the 50s Cafe.  And decide what I cut next.

I plan to have this to Steven before I head for Ohio.

Yeah!