Thursday, June 30, 2005

Clocking along

I've just finished my writing day. 

I'm at page 122 in the script.

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Once more, I'm overwriting.  I guess that's my method.

According my calculations, on average, the ratio of rough draft to final is 2.5 to 1.

A little depressing.  But it's the reality of writing.

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I am happy about what has been written.  The scenes are building well.

My schedule during this rough draft stage is strange.  I write until I'm tired.  Then I sleep until I'm not tired.  I get up and relax until I'm driven to write.

And the cycle repeats itself.

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The editing stage seems to dovetail better with my normal schedule.

I can edit anywhere. 

It's harder for me to write original material on a schedule.

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All right.  Time to get some rest.

Tuesday, June 28, 2005

Back on task ...

Finally.

I'm back on the screenplay.  I've spent the last few days getting focused through various ways. 

Talking to close friends.  Eating.  Watching DVD's.  Thinking a lot about everything but the work. 

Weird, the transfer of control from left to right brain.  But it sure works.

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I first transferred the rest of the expanded treatment into Final Draft.  Somewhere around 3 AM, I finally quit chatting on IM and focused completely. 

And now, the track for the first scene--the most critical love scene--is laid down.  I think it works.  For a really, really, really rough draft, that is.

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Sir Knavely is sprawled out behind me on the futon, fast asleep. 

I think he likes my latest choice of music:  romantic jazz.

Hey, I didn't come up with the genre's title on AOL.  I just know I work well to its rhythms.

Across the night, Sir K varied his time.  

He chewed on copies of the script treatment.  Bounced around the room like a postmodern Tigger. 

Carried on a tooth conversation below the desk with the various cables and wires. 

Slept in and on his favorite places.  Even sharpened his teeth on my quilt, pulling at the loose threads.

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I'm back in rough draft writing mode.

I can edit work that I've written any time.  But writing original material is different.  It takes a LOT out of me.  I need complete focus.

I need to plan time when I literally set everything else aside and lay it down.

And that's what I'm doing now.

It's 5:14 AM.  Time to sleep.

Monday, June 27, 2005

Kingdom of Dragons: Part I

Once upon a time, a long, long time ago, there was a little girl named Princess Lucy.  She lived in a small, beautiful kingdom.  It was very safe and clean.

When Lucy was unhappy, servants fed her milk and cookies.  Maids tucked her into bed at night under goosedown quilts and silk sheets.  Her own personal chef served her dinner and breakfast and lunch.

Lucy's mother and father ruled the kingdom with justice and wisdom.  They were beloved by their people.

 

One night, Lucy had a nightmare.  She dreamed that a giant Dragon swooped down on their kingdom.  It crashed through her father's castle, and chased Lucy all the way across the kingdom to a little castle.  She ran inside.  Up the steps to the top of a small tower.  There, she found a small bedroom.  And she hid under its bed.

But the Dragon smashed through the little castle.  It fell down, down, down.  Lucy dropped to the ground with it.  She jumped up out of the wreckage, and ran outside.  The Dragon was waiting.  Lucy was caught.  The Dragon opened his fiery mouth … and then Lucy woke up.

 

Lucy couldn't forget that dream.  But she didn't tell anyone about it.  She figured they’d never understand.  So she lived with her fear.

When Lucy turned thirteen, her parents sent her to the Kingdom of Dragons.  In spite of the ominous-sounding name, her new world was beautiful.  There were friendly girls and boys everywhere, just like Lucy, who had come from all over the surrounding kingdoms.  Lucy was given a small room at the top of a tall tower in the king's castle.

Lucy should have made friends.  But she didn't.  She worried about the Dragon.

 

One day, during a baking lesson in the kitchen, she saw him.  He was crouched above her teacher’s head, on the mantle of the cooking fireplace.  He was grinning at her and licking his fiery chops.  Then, very slowly, he winked.

Lucy screamed.  She left the kitchen and went running through the streets.

When she stopped running, she found herself outside a small cottage.  She felt very thirsty.  She went up the brick path and knocked on the door.  An little old lady with white hair and a kindly face answered it.  She looked at Lucy over her gold, wire-rimmed glasses.  She smiled and invited her inside.

Lucy stepped into the warm kitchen.  A fire was crackling in the fireplace and a pot was boiling.  The little old lady offered her a cup of mint tea.  Lucy took it and drank.  The little old lady smiled again at Lucy.  What was wrong?  Did she want some milk and cookies?

Lucy sank into a chair.  She wasn't hungry.   She didn't want milk and cookies.  She just wanted the Dragon dead.  When the old lady asked her what was wrong, she could only stare at her.

Lucy looked at the little old lady's gold, wire-rimmed glasses, and the coils of her mind curled up into a tiny ball.  It throbbed painfully.  All she saw in its red glow was the dragon's winking eye.  It winked and winked and winked and winked.

 

Finally, the tiny ball that was her mind uncurled.  Lucy looked over at the little old lady, who was knitting patiently and humming a familiar nursery song.  She smiled at Lucy.

Lucy got up out of her chair and thanked her.  The little old lady led her to the door.  She told Lucy that she was welcome to come back anytime.

Lucy returned to her room in the tall tower of the king's castle.  On the desk was a letter from her parents.  They were worried.  They hadn't heard from her lately.  She stared at the letter.  She tried to answer it.  But she couldn't.

Lucy dressed in her warm, yellow PJ's.  She blew out the candle.  She climbed into her large, four-poster bed.  She pulled the goosedown quilt around her neck.  She stared into the dark, listening to the sound of crickets chirping outside the small tower.

Lucy lay and thought about the Egyptian silk that made up her sheets, all 1050 threads.  She thought about all the geese who grew the feathers in her goosedown quilt.  She thought about the little old lady's smile and her gold, wire-rimmed glasses.  She wondered if she'd be that kind when she was old.  She thought about how safe she felt in the old lady's kitchen.

But behind it all was her fear of the dragon.  It had turned the white strands of her mind to red, and they still quivered gently, setting her emotions on edge.  She hurt all over.  Finally, Lucy fell asleep.

 

The next day, silent, Lucy attended her classes.  Her teachers asked her questions, but she couldn't focus.  She kept watching for the Dragon.  She just never knew when he'd appear.

Once she was warned by the sharp smell of his body odor, and she looked over to find him sitting beside her.  Another time, she felt the hairs on her neck singe.   She turned around, only to see him laughing at her.  Once he landed right in front of her as she walked to class, causing her to go running in the opposite direction.

Each time, she tried not to scream.  But she couldn't help herself.  The other girls began to avoid her when they saw her coming.  They hated her screams.

 

The worst part, she thought, was that no one else could see her Dragon.

When she first arrived, four months previous, she'd never felt more safe.  She was in a kingdom where her teachers were trained to find and kill dragons.  Surely, when he showed up, all of her teachers would fight off her Dragon.  She'd be protected.  But now she realized that her Dragon was invisible to everyone but her. 

It's why they all look at me so strangely, she thought.  There he is, plain as day, hovering in the air above me.  And no one sees him.  Not his rough scales.  Not his oily back.  Not his sharp, dirty claws.  That's the very worst part.  I'm so alone.

Only the little old lady understands, Lucy thought.  But how can she help me?

Kingdom of Dragons: Part II

Rather than helping her fight the Dragon, her teachers remarked on Lucy's screams and unpredictable behavior.  They frowned on her lack of decorum.  Her peers didn't want her at their parties--they had written her off as a drama queen.  Lucy spent more and more time alone.

Finally, Lucy's parents visited.  They were accompanied by all of Lucy's maids and servants, who made her milk and cookies.  They served her dinner.  They tucked her into bed at night under her soft goose-down quilt.  The next morning, they made her breakfast and lunch.

And then over dinner that night, after meeting with Lucy's teachers, her parents asked her if she wanted to go home.  It was her decision.

She stared at them.

"No," she said.  "No.  I do not want to go home.  It's even more dangerous there."

"Why?" asked the king.

"Because he'd just follow me there."

"Who?" said her father.

The window opened softly.  No one noticed.  Not the servants.  Not the maids.  Not her  parents.  The Dragon slinked inside and sat beside the fireplace.  He smiled at Lucy, showing his big teeth.  He relit the fire with his breath.

Lucy stood, frantically.  She pointed to the Dragon.  She tried to control the scream that welled up inside her.

Her parents looked at the fireplace and then back at her.  The servants and maids looked at the fireplace and then back at her.

"Sit down, Lucy," her mother said.  "You're just being dramatic."

"Yes," said her father, kindly.

Lucy wouldn't sit down.

"You can't see him?  There, in the chair beside the fireplace?" Lucy asked.  She watched the Dragon begin licking the blood off his sharp claws.

Lucy's parents and maids and servants looked again.

"Jack, go sit in the chair," said the queen.

One of the servants walked to the chair beside the fireplace.  The Dragon saw him coming.  He grinned and flapped his wings, raising himself above the chair.  He hovered there as Jack sat down.

"See, Lucy," said the king.  "I'm afraid --"  He looked at his wife.

"It's all in your head," said the queen. 

The Dragon almost fell out of the air laughing.  His body flopped about, his white, pasty stomach heaving.

"It's all right, Jack.  You can go get dessert now," said the queen.  Jack got up from the chair.  He walked into the kitchen.

Once Jack left, the Dragon flopped into the chair again.  He began biting between his paws.  The dirt came off like crusty pieces of charcoal.  The Dragon chewed them thoughtfully, licking his lips and watching Lucy as he did.  He offered her a piece. 

Lucy waved away his offer.  She sank back into her chair, watching him intently.  The Dragon preened for her.  He brushed the black crumbs of his snack off his white waistcoat of a stomach.

Lucy could see his heart beating lightly behind the white, rubbery skin.  It was missing the fourth beat, she decided.  There was always a slight pause after the third beat.  She wondered if all dragons were like that.

Lucy could see that the Dragon was flattered by her attention.  After a few moment, he made a show of looking at his watch reluctantly.  He turned to the window, looked out, and then back at her again.  He winked at her.  Then he waddled back to the window.  He opened it, climbed out on the window ledge, and shut it behind him.  She heard his wings beating the air as he flew off.

“Imagination is a wonderful thing, Lucy.”

Lucy realized that her mother was talking to her.

“But I think you’ve let it get away from you,” the queen said, pouring rich cream on Lucy’s blackberry cobbler.

“I’m very hungry,” said Lucy.

"That’s good, my dear," her mother said.  She raised her fingers and snapped them.  A servant jumped to attention.

“More cream for Lucy’s cobbler,” said the queen.

Lucy ate her blackberry cobbler and cream thoughtfully.  She remembered the way the Dragon winked at her. She remembered his pasty, white stomach.  She wondered if she should visit the little old lady again.

The next morning, Lucy's parents left.  Lucy’s father wondered what he had done wrong.  Perhaps he was a bad parent. 

Lucy assured him that he and her mother were the best parents a girl like her could have.  The queen joined them, patting dollops of cold cream on her face.  She kissed Lucy goodbye and stepped into the waiting carriage.  Servants assisted her. 

Lucy’s father stood outside with Lucy.  He looked at her a long time.  She looked back.  Then he hugged her tightly.  He climbed into the carriage after his queen.  The carriage rolled smoothly away.

And Lucy went off to her classes.

 

The morning her parents returned home, Lucy had a violin lesson.  Afterwards, she went for a walk.  She walked past the old lady’s cottage and turned down a small ally into the courtyard of a small inn called The Castle Café.

In the café, two fierce knights sat at a small table under a palm tree.  Their names were Sir Castellon and Sir Baptisto.  They were drinking large mugs of coffee, black and strong.  Their armor clanked when they moved.

Lucy went over to them and stood there.  She waited until Sir Baptisto looked at her. 

“Hello, I’m Lucy,” she said.

“Hi,” said Sir Baptisto.

Lucy continued to stand.  Finally, Sir Baptisto gestured to Lucy to sit down.

"Thank you, I will."

The two men continued to drink their coffee.

"I don't want milk and cookies," Lucy said.

"How about a cup of coffee?" asked Sir Baptisto.

"Sure," she said.

Sir Castellon whistled a tune under his breath as Sir Baptisto left to get a large mug filled with coffee.  As he returned with it, Sir Castellon pulled out a small knife and silently cut a piece of sausage with it.  Then he ate it.

Lucy watched the knife suspiciously.  She drank from her mug of coffee.  It was black.  Bitter.

“What is this place?” Lucy asked them.

“It’s a training school for knights who want to kill dragons.”

“I thought no one around here actually killed dragons.  They tell me dragons don't exist,” Lucy said.

“Oh, they’re around,” said Sir Baptisto.  “It’s just that most people don’t see them.  I just killed one this morning.  Right out there on the street.”

Lucy almost choked on her coffee.

“What?” Lucy turned to Sir Castellon.  “You see dragons too?”

“Yes,” said Sir Castellon.  He cut another piece of sausage and ate it.

“We each had to slay a dragon before we could be knighted,” said Sir Baptisto.  "Years ago."

“I thought no one else saw dragons,” said Lucy.  She said it before she realized it.

Sir Castellon turned to look at her.  She flushed red.  He watched her, chewing his sausage thoughtfully.

“Would you like to learn how to slay dragons?” Sir Baptisto asked her.  Lucy looked at him gratefully.

“Do we have an opening?” Sir Baptisto asked Sir Castellon.

“Yes,” said Sir Castellon, getting to his feet, his armor clanking.  He limped away into the inn.

“All right, then,” said Sir Baptisto, lingering a moment and smiling at her.  “That’s that, then.  You’re accepted.  Meet us here for your first lesson at 6 AM tomorrow.  Be on time.”

“Just like that?” said Lucy.

But she was talking to the air.  Sir Baptisto had followed Sir Castellon into the inn.  But before she went inside, she looked back at Lucy and smiled.

Lucy sat at the table in the midday sun and drank her coffee.  She liked its bitter taste.  Its blackness was comforting, somehow.  It warmed her all the way to her stomach.

“I will learn how to slay him," she told herself.

 

It was a much-changed Lucy, five years later, who heard a scream coming from the class next to hers.

The young woman, fully grown now, her face and arms tanned from regular exposure to the sun and exercise, stepped outside. 

A young girl she hadn’t seen before was running down the street.

Lucy set her violin down and walked to the little old lady's house.  She waited outside.  No need to distract the little old lady from her work..

When the girl came back out, she saw Lucy.  She stopped.  She looked at Lucy with a smile that was pasted over her perfectly white teeth.

“Hi,” said Lucy.  “Like some company on the way home?”

The girl looked surprised.

“Yes, thank you,” said the girl.

She continued to look at Lucy.  Lucy looked back at her with grey, serious eyes.  Finally the girl smiled, a real one this time.

“I’m Ariel.”

“You’re welcome.”

“You’re Lucy.”

“Yes.”

Satisfied, Ariel turned and began walking up the street.  She flipped her blonde hair away from her face and ate from the cookie in her hand.  Lucy’s armor clanked as she walked beside her.

 “Everyone knows you.  They say you fight dragons.”

“Yes,” said Lucy.

“And kill them.”

“Sometimes.”

“You don’t talk much,” said Ariel.

“No,” said Lucy.  “I used to have more to say.”

Lucy’s hand rested on her sword.  She looked around, then glanced at Ariel.  She realized that the girl had followed her security sweep perfectly.  Fearful she might be.  Stupid she was not.

“How did you know?” asked Ariel.

“Know what?” asked Lucy.

“About the Dragon.  No one else can see him.”

Lucy stopped and looked at Ariel.  She looked back at Lucy.  Fear in her blue eyes.  Finally, Lucy turned and began walking again.  Ariel followed.

“How did you know?” she repeated.

“It’s what I do,” said Lucy.

Friday, June 24, 2005

Kingdom of Dragons: Part III

When they got back to the king’s castle, it was quiet.  No one seemed worried about Ariel’s disappearance.  The guards had seen Lucy get up and follow Ariel.  Everyone knew her role by now.

Lucy saw Ariel to her room.  It was Lucy’s old room, up at the top of the small tower.  She waited while Ariel got dressed, and then she tucked her into bed and kissed her forehead.  She left after blowing out the candle.

As she headed over to her room at the senior dorm.  As she walked, she thought about Ariel.  Somehow, she seemed much younger than Lucy had been.  But the fear was the same.

Back at her room, Lucy passed girls in nightgowns who were heading to the study room together.

“Hey, Lucy,” said a tall girl carrying a stack of arithmetical research.

“Did you find the little one?” another asked, concerned.  She was carrying a flute and some rolls of music.

“Yes.  She’s fine,” said Lucy.  She smiled at the girls, then clanked away.

Back at her room, Lucy locked the door and took off her armor, piece by piece.  She pulled out her old, yellow flannel pajamas.  She sat and sharpened her sword with a whetstone.

Suddenly, she heard a familiar chuckle.  She heard the crunch of teeth on charcoal.  She looked around.  No one was there.

“Ah, Elfred,” she said.  “Always the bravest of cowards.”

Silence.  The wind made the candle sputter, even though the window remained closed.  She heard the beating of wings outside the window.

Lucy went to the window, threw it open, and looked up at the sky.  She saw what looked like a falling star.  Only it flew upwards rather than down.  It was close.  If she’d had her bow with her, she could have hit it.

She shut the window and turned to look over her room.  As a senior, she had had her choice of rooms, and she liked this one on the ground floor.

The bed was spare and comfortable.  The drapes at the windows were functional.  At the corner was a table with a small basin of water under a simple mirror.  A library of books lined both sides of the small fireplace, which had burned down to red coals.

Lucy yawned.  Her body ached from the new training moves Sir Castellon had run her through today.  She lay her sword beside her bed.  She climbed in under the covers.  She blew out the candle.  Lying in the dark, Lucy remembered the look in Ariel’s eyes.  She remembered the way she chewed her cookie.

She thought about her first year here.  The way the girls moved away from her when she screamed and ran in fear from Elfred, her Dragon.

Things were different now.  Everyone said hello to her in the halls.  She didn’t say much in response, just smiled and answered their questions simply.

She realized that she had adopted Sir Castellon’s way of speaking.  Which was funny, in view of how much she hated him the first two years.

That first year, Sir Castellon had barely spoken to her except to yell at her fiercely, telling her everything she was doing wrong, telling her that no woman should become a dragon fighter.

But she had persisted.  She never complained.  She did everything Sir Castellon asked of her.  And when she killed her first dragon, the smile she got from her teacher made her happier that she had dreamed was possible.

She knew now what her mentor had done.  He had forced her to rely on herself.  Only then could she truly take care of herself.  Only then would she be safe.

And it worked.  As she began to gain experience in handling the sword, she began to lose her fear of the Dragon that had haunted her the first year she came to her new school.

 

The killing of her first dragon was a milestone of sorts, she realized.  Everyone looked at her differently when she came back to campus that day, carrying the head of a dragon,still dripping green blood.

Most of her peers had never seen a dragon before, and they crowded around her, praising and petting her.  Her housemates and wanted to decorate their study room with hit, but she said no.  She had it stuffed and mounted by one of her father’s finest gamesmen, and then she presented it to Sir Castellon and Sir Baptisto.  They accepted the gift gravely.

Then Sir Castellon told her to meet him the next morning for additional training.

She was sure it’d be easy to kill her own Dragon after that.  But now that she was ready for him, she couldn’t find him.  Strange, she thought.  The first dragon was small, but it changed her perspective completely.  She began looking forward to confronting her own Dragon.  But no such luck.  She couldn’t find him.  He was gone, as if he had never existed.

When she told Sir Castellon, he merely grunted.  Sir Baptisto suggested that she go dragon hunting outside the walls of the city.  Just to keep in practice.

“He’ll show up when he’s ready,” he told her.  “Until then, keep working.”

Lucy’s growing confidence was noticed by her peers and parents.  When she went home over vacation, her mother seemed to resent it.

Her father just told her that he wished sometimes for his little girl again, and Lucy realized that she had truly changed.

"I can't stand the armor and leather you wear everywhere," said the queen.  "You have so many beautiful gowns.  Why not wear them?  And do you have to bring your sword to the table?”

They were in the middle of dinner on Lucy's third day home during Winter  Break.  It was Lucy's junior year.

Lucy didn’t respond.  She sat quietly and watched the maids and servants clean up after them.  She looked over at her father, who stood at the grand fireplace, smoking a cigar.  He turned and looked at her thoughtfully.  She smiled at him.  Her father smiled back.

 

Lying now in her bed, her armor and leather on a chair nearby, Lucy remembered the last conversation she had had with the Dragon, when he revealed his name to her.  What a strange name, she thought.  And what a great deal of pain he had caused her during her first year of school here.

She wondered what Ariel’s dragon looked like.  Clearly, it was invisible to everyone.  Probably to Lucy as well.

How am I to protect her if I can’t see it to kill it? she thought.

The girl would have to learn to defend herself, Lucy thought.  Best get on with her training immediately. 

Not every girl should have to become a dragon fighter in order to feel safe, she thought grimly.  I wish I could do something.

She thought about Elfred again.  And her mind tightened into that familiar red coil.

 

The next day, Lucy invited Ariel to the Castle Café for milk and cookies.  She introduced Ariel to Sir Castellon and Sir Baptisto.

After the knights clanked off to teach another lesson on swordplay to some young students, Ariel told Lucy all about the Dragon that only she could see.  Lucy didn’t say much.  She just drank her coffee and listened to Ariel.

Then Lucy got up and went over to the inn, leaving Ariel sitting with her milk and cookies.  She returned moments later with a large mug of coffee.  It was black and strong and steaming hot.

“Drink this,” she told Ariel.

Ariel watched as Lucy picked up her milk and cookies and took them back into the inn.  She stared at her coffee unhappily.

“Do I have to drink this?” she asked, when Lucy returned.

“Yes."

“Why?”

Lucy wondered if she had made a mistake.  Then she thought about the way Ariel had run down the street, screaming.  She didn’t have a choice.

“Just drink it.  You’ll get used to the bitter taste.”

Ariel looked at her.  Then she picked up the mug and sipped.

“You’ll begin swordplay lessons tomorrow morning,” Lucy said to her.  “There’s nothing else to do.”

“Tomorrow morning?”

“Yes.  6 AM.”

 

Several weeks later.  Lucy was waiting for Ariel in the back courtyard of the Castle Café for a tutorial.  Lucy was drinking her morning cup of coffee.  She had picked up the habit from Sir Castellon.  Ariel was late again.

Lucy stepped into the kitchen of the Castle Café to get a refill of coffee from the cook.  As she stepped outside, she saw Ariel entering the courtyard from the street.

Suddenly, right in front of her, Elfred the Dragon appeared, flying in and dropping onto the ground in front of Ariel.  She screamed.  Ariel’s scream caused Lucy to drop her cup of coffee, spilling it all of her shiny armor.

The dragon was raw and red from the morning sun.  It blackened nostrils breathed fire and smoke.  It was enraged, and Lucy realized that it intended to kill Ariel.

Ariel screamed again.  In shock, Lucy realized that Ariel’s dragon was her own.  Ariel looked over and saw Lucy coming.  Suddenly, she fainted.

Lucy felt her fear drop away from her like a bulky winter coat.  In fury, Lucy pulled out her sword.  She raced towards the dragon.  He saw her coming and hopped backwards, trying to take to the air. 

For the first time, Elfred looked afraid.  He clearly hadn’t realized Lucy would be there.  Ariel was supposed to be easy pickings.

And he sure didn't wink anymore at Lucy.

Lucy looked up at him, flapping his wings just above her.  But something was wrong.  His flight balance was off.  He began to sway, raising his paw as if to smack her.  It left his pasty white belly underneath completely exposed. 

"Just the way I like it," she said aloud.

And then Lucy drove her sword straight into the rubbery white skin right over the dragon's heart.  Again, and again, and again.  The dragon reared up, waving its dark claws at the sky.  It screeched out its pain.

Glancing behind her as she backed away from the dying dragon, Lucy caught a glimpse of Ariel, who had recovered and was now crouching behind a tree, staring at the dragon in awe.

The dragon crashed flat to the ground, flattening the grass blades below its long, fleshy belly.  The fire died in its mouth.  The dragon's eyes shut.  It no longer winked at Lucy.

Lucy looked down at Ariel.  Ariel was looking at Lucy's sword.  It dripped green dragon's blood.  Ariel looked again at Lucy.  Then back at the sword.  There was awe and respect written into Ariel's face.

Lucy looked down at her coffee cup, spilled on the ground during the attack.  Lucy smiled.  She stretched out her hand to Ariel.

"Let's go get another cup of coffee at the Castle Cafe." 

"And could we talk about slaying dragons?"  Ariel's hand was warm and trusting.

"Yes," said Lucy.  "We will.  But first, coffee."

 

Lucy turned to head back with Ariel to the kitchen.  With a start, she realized that Sir Castellon and Sir Baptisto were standing in front of her.  They had seen the entire thing.

Sir Baptisto looked at Ariel.

“There’s a special ceremony this afternoon on the front lawn,” Sir Baptisto said to Ariel.  “You might want to attend.  Our first young woman will be knighted.”

“I’ll be there,” said Ariel.  Her eyes shone as she looked at her savior.  Lucy looked away.

“Here,” said Sir Baptisto to Ariel.  “Let’s get you inside to look at the scratch on your cheek.”  He led Ariel inside.  Lucy watched them go.

“Will you attend?  Lucy?”

Lucy suddenly realized that Sir Castellon had spoken to her.  She looked up at his grey eyes.  They looked at her steadily.

“Yes.”

 “You might want to clean that armor up some,” he said, pointing to the spot where she had spilled her coffee.

“I'll do that,” she told him.

“Good,” Sir Castellon told her.

She watched him clank away, limping slightly.

Thursday, June 23, 2005

Divorce!

Okay.  It's been a very long time since I made an entry.

But I'm done with school for the year.  I'm relaxed.  Time to write.

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This BLOG has a problem.  I originally launched it to talk about my writing.

Then Sir Knavely broke into it.  He entered an entry of his own.

He's too damn popular.

Hey.  This blog's about ME.

His "Secret Missive" ("Boring Stuff") got over 200 hits in three days.

And people emailed me:  More Knavely, more Knavely!

So I locked him out of the blog and sulked for a month and a half.

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Fans of Sir Knavely have been demanding that I return him to the screen.

So I had an idea.  Why not give Sir Knavely a blog of his own? 

And an email address.

He can write on his own dime. 

When I'm sleeping.

I never have to even glance at it.  Problem solved.

Just to make sure, I'll add a link to Sir Knavely's Blog.  If people want to see his view, they can go there.

Yessssssssssssssssssssss!

I'll divorce our blogs!

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Now for the really interesting stuff.

About me.

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Revisions on the first two-thirds of The French Inquisitor screenplay are complete. 

The first draft is now in writing partner's hands.

And now I'm gearing up to do the last third of the screenplay.

See?  That was page-turning stuff.